Monday, July 5, 2010


all your words
were the notes that i read
on five lines,
a requiem of blue
you made just for me.

they moved my hands,
the knife, my baton.
and the blood marched forth,
my own red army choir
singing a grand coup d'vivre.

the seats remain silent,
invisible in the limelight.
and you, the brilliant composer
of such luscious tragedy.
you are nowhere to be found.

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  2. i am here now and ready


    thank you for your thoughts
    and for being so good tome
    and for being so forgiving

    im a child
    discovering
    trust me
    dont give up on me yet please
    i know i love all you wrote
    and will cherish it forever
    pleaseforgive my awkward and
    mentally retarded initial reaction
    foreveryour true love
    <3

    my only defense is that i am love
    with you and prone to acting likea freak

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  4. Slow, slow love to grow
    only in your eyes did I
    see the dawn
    In my eyes you shone
    and together
    we watched our love grow

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